Simon woke up to a bad dream. The
clocked ticked 11.30 pm. He tried to recall the dream but couldn’t do it
entirely. He could only recall it in bits and pieces.
Something about the ring, he
wondered. He closed his eyes again to picture the ring. He got it this time. It
was a gold ring, large and wide. The case looked hexagonal in shape with three
segments – two triangles and one stretched square. In between the square part,
a red stone shimmered, embossed on the
ring.
Peculiar ring that disturbed Simon Art by Anaga N |
This looks familiar! I remember
this peculiar ring case!
‘It’s my mother’s ring!’ His eyes
swelled up in horror. “She asked me to keep it safe with me, after her demise
but I totally forgot” he scrunched the pillow.
All these years, he was living with
his mother. She faced all sorts of troubles raising him, being a single mother
from a minority community. With all the societal conformities, she had been confronted
by both relatives and strangers and unrelated people, she stood like a rock. “How
can you raise a child alone? Why can’t you get married? Why don’t you convert
yourself?”
Regardless of the all the troubles,
she had managed to raise Simon with utmost compassion. She may have left him
now but there is enough money to feed
him for another five years though he is just out of school now.
Her husband had given this ring, which he got from his grandmother.
It is believed in their family that the
ring finds a special lady and remains with her before moving on to the next
generation.
Unable to handle the ruminating
thoughts of his mother and the ring, Simon scurried to the cemetery to find her
mother. It was 12.30 am and he couldn’t get a clear view of the atmosphere as
it was pitch dark around. The rain-bearing nimbus clouds looked all charged-up.
In between, peeked the moon igniting the atmosphere, which was helpful in finding
his mother. After a while, he was convinced he had found her.
Standing before the grave, he
looked lost in thoughts. What do I do? Should I dig it up? What if the ring
is not there? What if somebody comes? What if that somebody is…?
While contemplating over his own
thoughts, he heard a group of stray dogs howling from the distance that brought
a chill down his spine. He had little time to decide as the clouds looked heavy and could
start pouring anytime. His heart raced like that of an Olympic athlete and
blended rhythmically with the distant rumbling of thunder.
Swallowed in fear, he started
digging with disturbed feelings running down his memory. Beads of sweat started
dripping down his brows. While he was at work, for every other minute he felt
somebody observing from behind. Once in
a while, he gathered courage to turn around but to only find the holy cross
erected over other tombs.
After a while, he hit something
that looked like a hand. It’s my mother’s hand, he jumped out of his
skin. Gathering composure within a few minutes, he probed for the ring and
found nothing.
What the hell! He flew
into a rage.
Yet again, he started digging. This
time, anger pushed him hard, and he found the other hand quickly. There it
is, he heaved a huge sigh of relief, on finding the ring.
Relieved, he started pulling the
ring. It wasn’t easy. Looks like she is not giving it up. But he didn’t give up
either. He pressed hard, gritted his teeth, stretched his muscles and a minute
later, he got it. It worked. He got the ring. But he couldn’t get a closer look
in that darkness, so he ran home immediately.
After reaching home, he decided to take
a shower before examining the ring. He kept it on the table and hurried to the
bathroom. That’s when he heard the doorbell.
DING DONG…
A strange silence followed. The
clock ticked like never before and it daunted him. The calling bell shook him
by surprise.
Who could it be? Its 2 am for God’s
sake! He started shaking in shock. After giving it a minute, he opened
the door to see a visibly exhausted old woman. Her saree was neatly fringed and
tucked. A big round red bindi flashed from her forehead, juxtaposing her bright
yellow face. The disordered grey hairs strayed all over her face. Bearing a
rather composed look, she requested for a glass of water in a soft voice.
‘Thank God! I thought it’s
something else,’ he sighed.
‘I am sorry, are you expecting
somebody?’ she grinned.
‘No… I was…I just… Never mind!’
Simon fumbled. ‘I will get you water’
He gets her a bottle of water and he notes somethings strange with her hand. HER RING FINGER WAS MISSING!
He got curious and thought of asking but something arrested the words from coming out. Maybe he didn’t know how to put it. Maybe he was scared. Maybe he did not want to sound nosy. Or maybe he was tired and wanted to go to bed. Whatever it was, she drank and left.
Blood trail Art by Anaga N |
He closed the door and noted a few traces of blood on the knob. He was
taken aback by the very sight of blood on his door. He looked over his hand,
which was sopping with blood and saw the drops on the floor as well. He
followed the meandering droplets’ trail that went all the way till the lobby
near the table where he had kept the ring.
The sight of the ring gave him a
heart attack. He couldn’t believe his own eyes as he saw the ring along with
the finger, which was oozing with blood.
‘Oh God! I pulled the ENTIRE
FINGER!’ Simon freaked out. ‘WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?’
His lips continued mumbling vaguely
for a while before coming to a halt. He sat on the couch and gave it a thought
and looked disturbed again. Did this have anything to do with the old lady?
Didn’t I get my mother’s ring?
Shaking and terrified, Simon carefully
took the finger to get a better view at the ring. Mud and blood tested his
patience. He rushed to the sink, washed it thoroughly and saw the ring. His heart
pounded fast and eyes bulged out in fright. While trying to move his trembling
body, he heard this…
DING DONG…
Awesome narration, sir
ReplyDeleteSuperb... I liked the way you brought in the mother's pain in growing up a child with no support... Also I loved the way you finished with the DING DONG..
ReplyDeleteBizzare😱gives the chills to the reader😵 narration is so very frightening ji..great work as always!! Keep going😭
ReplyDeleteMy daughter says this is the best of all she has read from u. Really bizzre but surely good... Plz Continue the story plz said my daughter..
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Love the gripping narration and the thrill it holds. Write more and share!
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