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Still Priya was holding her hands and tightened her grip, after realizing Divya was frightened.
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Still Priya was holding her hands and tightened her grip, after realizing Divya was frightened.
"Relax
yaar. It's just a bell. You are shivering badly." Priya was concerned.
"Just
a bell? Are you out of your mind?" shouted Divya.
"May
be or maybe not, I am upset at this."
"Priya,
this is more than just a bell. Could you…"
"Enough,
I got it." Priya intervened. "This is about darkness. You are afraid
of darkness. Nothing else! I know already that you were left alone after a terrible
earthquake, which swallowed your family over the night. You must get away with
it now, at least for their sake!"
Tears
rolled down the cheeks of Divya.
Priya
continued, "Do you think your parents will feel happy watching you like
this?"
"No,
but..."
"Divya,
you can never stay in panicky state for the rest of your life. Persevere, and the
fear will dissolve. Otherwise it will engulf your capabilities. You know that.
Don't you?"
"Yeah,
kind of..."
"Kind
of? Seriously Divya? Look at yourself. How vulnerable you are?"
"Alright
it's all fine. I got you. Could you please listen to me once?
"I am all ears."
"Yes,
I am afraid of darkness but now there is something else. The ringing noise from
the door bell is bothering me.
"Yes
rang. So what?"
"Idiot!
There is no power."
"So
that's your problem. By the way Divya, you really think there is no
power?"
"What
do you mean?" Priya's statement raised her eyebrows.
Priya
stood up to leave after loosening Divya’s grip and slowly disappeared into the darkness.
A
soft voice resounded around the hall,
Darkness is your
ally
Stop indulging
it with folly
Embrace it tight
For its offering
might!
“Could
you just open the door, drama queen?” Divya screamed.
The
power came back. It engulfed the darkness in a glimpse of an eye. Her face lit
up in happiness watching the sudden turn-around in the living area. Before she
could react, she heard the bell ring again.
DING
DONG!
“What
the hell are you doing there Priya?”
DING
DONG!
“Oh
my..! Alright, I am done” She lost it and hurried up to open the door.
Opening
the door, she was taken aback to see a person standing outside the door. And
this time it was intense. Her eyes were wide open. Her heart was pumping hard
and fast; hard enough to explode in a minute as she could sense the pain. One
of her hands was holding the door firmly and the other went trembling to the
torso and started caressing it, in a way to raise her spirits.
“PRIYA…!?”
She gave her a baffling look.
“What’s
it? Why you took so long to open the door?” Priya slammed her. “Could you just
let me in at least NOW?”
Divya
let her in and remained silent. She was lost in her thoughts. Exhausted, Priya
fell on the mattress, which held her like a soft cloud.
But
in the meantime, Divya appeared fully perturbed.
Was I really
talking with someone?
Was there a
power-cut?
Or were all
these things were my hallucination?
Oh God! What am
I into?
She
was busy pondering over these scaring and unanswerable questions.
“Aren’t
you online?” Priya tried to interrupt but went in vain as there was no reply
from Divya.
“I pinged you in whatsapp. Didn’t you
receive?”
“You
what?” Divya caught her this time. “Whatsapp!”
“Just
check your phone.”
Divya
dashed to her phone, which showed a popped up notification against the name
Priya.
“What
the hell! There was nothing before.” She was furious.
“What
nothing before?” Priya probed.
“Just
shut up and sleep!” Divya yelled back.
Divya
sat across the corner of the living area, trying to focus on what she had just
experienced. Suddenly a shuffling-noise of papers caught her eye. The Diary!
She
grabbed the diary and checked the script once again which was exactly the same
as she narrated, except for the ending …they
cuddled over the bed showing their passionate love. But Priya had supplemented a word in the
last sentence, which was not there earlier.
..…all
of a sudden, Nisha screamed!!
“So
it was just to scare me off?” Divya paused for a moment. “But I am not actually
scared.”
“Whoever
you are, I’d say I don’t give a damn.” She sighed valiantly like never before
and went to bed, switching off all the lamps for the first time.
Eventually,
Divya realized that darkness is the absence of light and absences do not exist.
As
she lay down next to Priya, the pages of the diary again shuffled up for a
while before halting at the page, where the story continued …..
The final lines then showed,
The final lines then showed,
Pencil sketch done by Artist Chinnas |
---The End---
Nisha - The Finale Episode
Reviewed by Gowthama Rajavelu
on
16:00
Rating:
Oh god!!!
ReplyDeleteInteresting expression for a writer to note ;-)
DeleteLoved the story, Gowthama. Read all the parts at one go!! It has suspense, surrealism and the power to engage readers... :-) Wonderfully penned...
ReplyDeleteThank you Maniparna. Glad that you enjoyed it. Your generous feedback is appreciated.
DeleteReally creepy! Thank god, my house has an inverter! Wouldn't survive in the dark after reading " nisha" .��
ReplyDeleteReally creepy! Thank god, my house has an inverter! Wouldn't survive in the dark after reading " nisha" .��
ReplyDeleteAh that's quite a comment. Glad you read it alone. Maybe my poem would help you while in dark - Darkness is your ally. Perhaps if you hear that in the same whispering noise then it would be even more great, I believe.
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