As
she steps out from the womb
She
is yelled at with disdain
With
thwarted and enraged eyes
Yet
her sparkling eyes glitter
As
she grows old
She
care and support as a sister
Motivate
and inspire as a friend
But
to appreciated her, we don’t care
Time
after time
She
is being questioned
For
her modish outfits
For
not being courteous
For
raising questions
Yet
she answers politely with pride
She
clean, cook and washes
Accepts
the position as a housewife
She
is crushed, scorned and exhausted
and
pushed away to the corner
Sheds
her blood and gives a life
Being
used as an object for pleasure
She
laughs, takes comfort and hides her pain
She
tolerates pain and remains unruffled
Ignores
ill-treatment on purpose
And
make others feel happy and fulfilled
She
is a pure bliss in heart and soul
Because
she is the Woman and she is awesome!
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Because she is the Woman and she is Awesome - Women's Day thoughts
Reviewed by Gowthama Rajavelu
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Couldn't agree more.. The last line resonated so well Gowthama :)
ReplyDeleteYeah,SHE is awesome :P
Exactly, she is awesome. Thanks for spending time in my blog and sharing your thoughts. Do visit again. Happy blogging :-)
DeleteWonderful poem!
ReplyDeleteWell written!
Thanks Arun. Glad you liked it :-)
DeleteAmazing line and very beautiful blog.....
ReplyDeleteThanks for the compliments. Appreciate it.
DeleteUhmm.. Ur wife am sure is happy reading this...
ReplyDeleteYes indeed Ajai. Thanks for the comment.
DeleteUhmm.. Ur wife am sure is happy reading this...
ReplyDeleteVery soulful. Loved it from the bottom of my heart. :)
ReplyDeleteReally glad that you liked it. It really feels good when a poet comments about an amateur. Thank you.
DeleteMeaningful poem. Ofcourse women are awesome anyhow please ask your wife if she's also happy with your lines.
ReplyDeleteIndeed she is. Thanks for the compliments and I am happy that you liked it.
DeleteBeautiful lines for the occasion.
ReplyDeleteVery well expressed.
Thank you!
Glad you enjoyed it Indrani. Thanks for the comment.
DeleteYou've encapsulated the crux of womanhood in this poem. Wonderfully written... :-) Really a great tribute to all women on the Women's Day... :-)
ReplyDeleteWow feeling so nice to hear such words from you Maniparna. This is the greatest motivation. Thank you very much.
DeleteBeautiful.... That is what it is like to be a woman....have a great week and I hope you got enjoy women day
ReplyDeleteExactly Sara. Glad that you liked it. Thanks for spending time on my blog and sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated. Have a fantastic day.
DeleteGood one Gowtham, yup I used ur blog to get applause from my gf..hee hee
ReplyDeleteOh yeah? Great man. I'm so happy that my words have brought in smiles across your life. You made my day. Cheers.
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ReplyDeleteThanks Rashmi :-)
DeleteWow..what strong words filled with truth and veracity.. absolutely heart touching..keep writing more sir!
ReplyDeleteAwesome sir.
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